Nessbeatsfox's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dirty Buzzard]

Great!

What's that first instrument? It almost sounds like a guitar, but my ears think that it might be a piano with distortion...

Anyway, I love this track. Very groovy and laid back. You may have too much going on when it picks up at 0:27. I also wish this song was longer.

Great track all around!

satsumaudio responds:

Thanks :)
Yeah its a distorted electric piano.

[-]Orange Planet[-]

A little weird

The lead/melody is a little weird for my taste, but it's okay. It seems a little repetitive. The drums are done very well, and I like the broken beat sound towards the middle.

The ambient part could probably use a better transition, and the panning gets a little annoying. Also, I don't hear any bass throughout the track.

Pezmobile responds:

Yeah i made these back when i didn't exactly know what hip hop beats were, so i just made music for the fun and not the fans so i didn't really care if the song was too complicated, even with an essential thing like bass.

[Luigi Mansion Reck RMX]

Nice Remix

Not bad. One thing I would change though, is adding a snare. I think I can hear one, but it's so faint, I'm not sure if that's what it is. Nice remix.

DictatorBunny responds:

You are right I should add a snare. I was but I felt a little lazy. :| oh! and What you are hearing is the Hat.

Thanks for the Vote 8}

[Aberration _AKG_]

Too loud

The whole mix sounds too loud. I like the sound of the synths, and the melody/leads you have mix together very well. The song gets a little repetitive after a while, but it's all good. I would like to hear a more prominent bass. I can hear one, but it doesn't stand out like I think that it should.

Adachiskindagod responds:

lol sorry, when i was making the song i totally thought it was way 2 quiet, problem is that i have to switch audio drivers alot and the volumes on each are different

[Cluster - Green Hill Remix]

Nice

I like it when people do remixes and make it their own, instead of just ripping the original. I like how I can hear the original in there, without immediately recognizing it. This would be awesome if you made it a lot longer, or if you made it loop-able.

ClusterLaw responds:

Thanks alot, that's exactly what I was going for. PM me if you are intrested in getting a loop version of this then :)

[Again and a gain]

Great

The panning gets annoying very quickly. It'd be okay if it was just at the beginning, but it goes throughout the song. The drums are really good, and I love the synth that comes in at 0:54. As short as it is, you could make it a nice loop, or you should work on this one and make a longer techno song. Right now, it fits as a good ambient sound.

Direlire responds:

Thanks for the advices !
I'll work on it!

=)

[Phased safari (P)]

Not horrible, but it does need some work.

I hate it when my PC slows down while I'm trying to write stuff...

Starting off, you have a good sound with the fade in, but the percussion that comes it doesn't really compliment the instrument too well. The clicking sound just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the drums. And the hats and kick should have more power to them because they sound so weak compared to the lead.

The sudden change at 0:30 seems completely random, so I'd suggest a transaction to get to the next sound you're going for. The bass isn't bad, but it just sounds like an unaltered midi.

At 1:02, when most of the instruments stop, it sounds so plain and boring. Maybe having another instrument to compliment the rest of the sounds would help.

Again, at 1:16 the instrument that comes back in seems random and sudden. You may also work on mixing, adding reverb, delays, and other sounds to "clean up" your sound more.

Overall, not a horrible track, but it does need some work.

photosyntesen responds:

i understand what you mean but at 1.02 it was the point to stop almost every thing to have a "break" XD

Thanks for the review and the 7 ;)

-photosyntesen!

[-ganon95- Forever]

Good

The intro's really good, but it starts to get a little boring until around 2:08 or so. I really like the deep dark piano. Like newnerdproductionsTM said, it's not your best, but it's still a sweet track!

ganon95 responds:

my favorite part in this song is 2:59-3:50, the piano also had a wind chimes sound at an extremely low pitch going along with it

[Mystic Cave Zone Remix]

Sweet

Great remix. Sounds like the original, but with your own twist on it, which makes it good. I'd like to hear more percussion throughout though. The claps don't seem to fit with the rest of the tone. I think a nice groove beat on the drums would fit a lot better.

Watch it around 1:15 as the sounds seem to clash a little bit. Overall, it's a nice track, with a few flaws.

halfdeadorfull responds:

thanks! yeah, i agree with you; some of this does clash at points... oh well! thank you so much for the great review!

[Goreflick]

The drums

The drums are awesome, but the guitars sound way too fake. It clashes with the realistic percussion sound. Especially when the guitar speeds up, it just sounds too robotic.

Invest in a real guitar, or if you're going to use FL, I'd suggest trying more of an electronic genre.

Crosslife responds:

Thank you for an honest and good review
Will keep in mind