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I don't know..

To be honest, it just seems too random. The sounds are cool, but the drums don't have much rhythm to them, and the whole song is so thin. The high hat is way too distorted to. Try adding some substance, like a melody, or lead to keep listeners interested.

UnknownFear responds:

Thanks for the review. I am still working on this. Thanks for the vote.

-UnknownFear

So quiet...

Not bad for a MIDI. I like the sound of the lead. I can't tell if you had a bass though, which would have made it better. You could take out that instrument that comes in at 0:58 though. It doesn't seem to fit. I think it might just be cause it sounds flat in some places.

Keep up the good work though!

Qwertyuiopasd responds:

yeah, I didn't really intend to put this up, but we did anyway, so yeah. It's hardly my best effort. Please, let me redeem myself, and check out my other, actually good songs. :P

Thanks for the review!
~Qwerty

What was that?

It sounds like your song is just skipping the whole time. I can't tell what's going on... Try making a song, and not just noise.

trashcanman responds:

noise rocks

I gave you a four

Cause it has potential. To be honest (and polite), it wasn't very good. It was promising until right at 0:32. You just went all flat. It might sound cliche, but the more you practice, the better you'll get, so keep working on it. I don't want to bash it too much, cause this is actually better then some music I wrote when I got my first guitar. Keep it up man, and you could have some really good rock songs.

Stickfire responds:

That makes sense, because up until about 0:32 I was only playing on one string. I probably needed to tune my guitar.
I'll keep practicing. This is actually really good compared to me a month ago. I am improving at least.

Pretty good

Love the lyrics, but like you said, the vocals are slightly out of sync. And they need to be mixed better. But you already know this. The song is pretty good, but it seems a little short. Even if you repeated the first verse to extend it a little bit, and made it fade out maybe? I think that would make it better. But it also fits well as a loop too.

This is just a good song. Keep up the good work.

Triented responds:

Thanks alot!

I'm not too fond of the bass

Cause it seems off beat, and it doesn't seem to fit the rest of the song. The rest is nice though. I like how you didn't use percussion in this version. Gives it a nice mellow feel. Neat outro too.

ganon95 responds:

lol yea i was noticing that, im gonna be making that bass sound a lot better

Good

Yet another good song. Keep up the good work man!

ganon95 responds:

thanks =]

Nice

But to be honest, it seems a little weak. Like you need some instrument to come in harder and give it some more "umph". Good work though. Sounds good!

ganon95 responds:

lol its at it max and doesnt sound loud, if it were any louder cracking would happen =/ lol

Neat

Brings back weird memories of my childhood. Good bass in this one too. I think is right on the slow progressions though. Anyway, good song!

ganon95 responds:

lol i have actually never played dr. mario i just like the theme

Much better than the demo

And the demo was awesome! I like how it's not so random too. I really like the effects you used. Very nice.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked.

And I agree, it sounds much better when it's not so random. :D

What's going on? I am freakin' out! I'm always up for reviewing something, so if you want me to check out your stuff just drop me a PM.

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