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It sounds like your song is just skipping the whole time. I can't tell what's going on... Try making a song, and not just noise.
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noise rocks
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It's not too bad. I really like the drums, but it needs lyrics man. It just sounds so empty without them. If not vocals, then maybe more of a lead instrument. The piano is beautiful, but it doesn't hold up for a lead that well. It sounds like your clipping too, so try turning down the recording, so it doesn't sound so loud.
The bridge is awesome. Best part of the whole song. Overall, pretty good. Genre name's not bad either.
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It's just way too messy. I can't tell what you're going for. It sounds like you have two songs trying to play at the same time. Try taking the guitar out, and using it later in the song without the synth. Then it wouldn't sound so cluttered.
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Cause it has potential. To be honest (and polite), it wasn't very good. It was promising until right at 0:32. You just went all flat. It might sound cliche, but the more you practice, the better you'll get, so keep working on it. I don't want to bash it too much, cause this is actually better then some music I wrote when I got my first guitar. Keep it up man, and you could have some really good rock songs.
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That makes sense, because up until about 0:32 I was only playing on one string. I probably needed to tune my guitar.
I'll keep practicing. This is actually really good compared to me a month ago. I am improving at least.
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Love the lyrics, but like you said, the vocals are slightly out of sync. And they need to be mixed better. But you already know this. The song is pretty good, but it seems a little short. Even if you repeated the first verse to extend it a little bit, and made it fade out maybe? I think that would make it better. But it also fits well as a loop too.
This is just a good song. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks alot!
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As an instrumental, this song would be perfect, but I don't really like the voice. I'd use a real voice instead of a synth one. That lead is really cool. Anyway, keep up the good work!
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Cause it seems off beat, and it doesn't seem to fit the rest of the song. The rest is nice though. I like how you didn't use percussion in this version. Gives it a nice mellow feel. Neat outro too.
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lol yea i was noticing that, im gonna be making that bass sound a lot better
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Yet another good song. Keep up the good work man!
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thanks =]
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I didn't hear the original version, but this one is good. I like how it builds up, and it should come it hard again after 2:15 with that snare. That would make it perfect.
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lol i cant believe that considering how famous the original of this is you havent heard it 0.0
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But to be honest, it seems a little weak. Like you need some instrument to come in harder and give it some more "umph". Good work though. Sounds good!
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lol its at it max and doesnt sound loud, if it were any louder cracking would happen =/ lol
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