Midi?
Is the bass a midi sample? You would truly benefit from a live bass or a better bass sample. The guitar is okay, but it sounds too rough and overpowering. But a better bass may help with that.
The drums decent, but the hihats need some humanizing, as they sound so computerizing. Try mixing up the velocity a little on them to get more of a realistic sound out of them.
Not bad though, it's a nice little song, but could be longer.
Hence it's a demo; it's not complete yet.
I'd finish it but my creative juices are flowing as much as a dry river
Good
But it sounds so plain. Maybe add another instrument to counter the constant bass? I like the sound. Great work!
I was experimenting with trying to throw something else in there, but I thought it sounded better just keeping it as simple as it is.
Appreciate the feedback. :)
Nice
The song as a whole sounds so hollow. Like it's missing something. Maybe if it was louder? From what I can hear of the vocals, their pretty sweet. I love distorted vocals in music. Turn them up so we can hear them, and make the song longer and you'll have a 10 from me.
I put the vocal higher ;) But I made it short because I want it that way..
Well thx for the comment
The end
The song is nice and laid back, but the ending is horrible. It's really not that scary, more just annoying. Lose the ending and you have a great song.
Okay, thanks
Well
Well, I can barely hear the guitars, the drums need some equalizing, the singing is really not that great (no offense), and where's the bass? The whistling is too sharp and keeps clipping. The lyrics are really not that great either. But it's not that bad for doing in just 2 hours. If you're serious about writing anything at all, even if it's supposed to be a comedy song, take a few extra hours and work on the production, and it'd be worth listening to.
Finally an honest opinion lol. But ya I actually fixed up the song and lyrics, I just havent gotten to re-recording it yet. Plus I only have a 5 dollar mic originally used for counterstrike and a cheap video camera for recording so the drums aren't gonna get equalized anytime soon lol. But thanks for the opinion
Great!
Not too shabby. Your main melody doesn't change at all, which gives a repetitive feel. I think it would sound better if it changed even just a little. The drums are nice, but the fuzz sounding instrument (I think it's a snare?) should have more of an "umph" sound to get that real powerful industrial sound. I really like the change that comes in at 3:14. Makes for a nice counter sound to the rest of the track. I was really expecting the whole song to pick up more then it did, but that's okay. It sounds more like an hard industrial ambient song this way. Great attempt at your first industrial song! I hope to hear more from you.
thANK YOU VERY MUCH! :) The fuzz sound your hearing is actually a white noise effect I added to a clap to give it that extra touch
-m1ndr1nk3r
It should loop better
It's not horrible, but it would be nice if it actually looped instead of stopping like that. The panned instrument is okay, but it sounds a little too loud, at least compared to the rest of the song. I really can't think of what else to say about a 6 sec loop.
it does that with all the loops
i cant really get it to continue on and on
ill try to fix it
Very Dark
I love it. I can't think of anything I'd change. Awesome work!
Haha, thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Nice
Great track man. The lead that comes in is different, and it fits. Though, it sounds off beat in some places. Anyway, nice job!
lol this song actually came out of a challenge i came up with for myself, i wanted to attempt making a song at 200 BPM (usually i do about 140-170) if you slow this song down to 140 it sound VERY off beat lol
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