Nessbeatsfox's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[:::::there comeing::::::]

Well...

It's just way too messy. I can't tell what you're going for. It sounds like you have two songs trying to play at the same time. Try taking the guitar out, and using it later in the song without the synth. Then it wouldn't sound so cluttered.

[Intro of Power]

I gave you a four

Cause it has potential. To be honest (and polite), it wasn't very good. It was promising until right at 0:32. You just went all flat. It might sound cliche, but the more you practice, the better you'll get, so keep working on it. I don't want to bash it too much, cause this is actually better then some music I wrote when I got my first guitar. Keep it up man, and you could have some really good rock songs.

Stickfire responds:

That makes sense, because up until about 0:32 I was only playing on one string. I probably needed to tune my guitar.
I'll keep practicing. This is actually really good compared to me a month ago. I am improving at least.

[-TD- Since I've Seen Sunlight]

Pretty good

Love the lyrics, but like you said, the vocals are slightly out of sync. And they need to be mixed better. But you already know this. The song is pretty good, but it seems a little short. Even if you repeated the first verse to extend it a little bit, and made it fade out maybe? I think that would make it better. But it also fits well as a loop too.

This is just a good song. Keep up the good work.

Triented responds:

Thanks alot!

[Seven Past Eleven]

Nice

As an instrumental, this song would be perfect, but I don't really like the voice. I'd use a real voice instead of a synth one. That lead is really cool. Anyway, keep up the good work!

[-ganon95- Popcorn demo]

I'm not too fond of the bass

Cause it seems off beat, and it doesn't seem to fit the rest of the song. The rest is nice though. I like how you didn't use percussion in this version. Gives it a nice mellow feel. Neat outro too.

ganon95 responds:

lol yea i was noticing that, im gonna be making that bass sound a lot better

[-ganon95- caramelldansen]

Good

Yet another good song. Keep up the good work man!

ganon95 responds:

thanks =]

[-ganon95- pokemon stadium demo]

Nice

But to be honest, it seems a little weak. Like you need some instrument to come in harder and give it some more "umph". Good work though. Sounds good!

ganon95 responds:

lol its at it max and doesnt sound loud, if it were any louder cracking would happen =/ lol

[-ganon95- Dr. Mario]

Neat

Brings back weird memories of my childhood. Good bass in this one too. I think is right on the slow progressions though. Anyway, good song!

ganon95 responds:

lol i have actually never played dr. mario i just like the theme

[Closing..and Letting Go]

Much better than the demo

And the demo was awesome! I like how it's not so random too. I really like the effects you used. Very nice.

SkatingIsGenetic responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked.

And I agree, it sounds much better when it's not so random. :D

[A Soothing Energy]

That was weird...

But in a good way. I really like the panning bass, and the echoing claps. The voice tops it off real nice too. I don't think that the synth in the intro really fits the song though. The strings don't fit either. Otherwise, this song is great.

SonicJ responds:

Hm...I used a piano (or was it rhodes) for that main sound, and thanks for noticing the paning bass( Didn't know what it was called) I was going to mention it when I uploaded the song, but I forgot. You think the bass and claps go good? Cool :)
Thanks Ness, for taking the time to review my track :)