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The kick

Great start, but then the kick comes in. It doesn't seem to have any umph at all that it needs. Even for a happy song like this, the kick seems to high. If you're gonna bring in a kick, bring in the rest of the drums. With just the kick it sounds incomplete.

The end doesn't suck. It just sounds like you're building up to something. It loops well too.

The drums

The drums are awesome, but the guitars sound way too fake. It clashes with the realistic percussion sound. Especially when the guitar speeds up, it just sounds too robotic.

Invest in a real guitar, or if you're going to use FL, I'd suggest trying more of an electronic genre.

Crosslife responds:

Thank you for an honest and good review
Will keep in mind

Midi?

Is the bass a midi sample? You would truly benefit from a live bass or a better bass sample. The guitar is okay, but it sounds too rough and overpowering. But a better bass may help with that.

The drums decent, but the hihats need some humanizing, as they sound so computerizing. Try mixing up the velocity a little on them to get more of a realistic sound out of them.

Not bad though, it's a nice little song, but could be longer.

Sawdust responds:

Hence it's a demo; it's not complete yet.

I'd finish it but my creative juices are flowing as much as a dry river

Not too bad

I get what you're going for, but I don't really hear the build-up. I was waiting for another instrument to kick in, but I never heard it. The drums are okay at first, but with now variation, they get very monotonous after a while. The piano is okay, but is very repetitive and doesn't do anything too exciting. Not a bad song, just very boring after a while.

Good

But it sounds so plain. Maybe add another instrument to counter the constant bass? I like the sound. Great work!

Gooch responds:

I was experimenting with trying to throw something else in there, but I thought it sounded better just keeping it as simple as it is.

Appreciate the feedback. :)

When I found this song

it had 3 straight votes of 0. Kinda harsh considering there were no reviews...

Nice little diddy. The instrument choices are not typical, but I think they work really well together. I really like the intro too. After a little bit, it starts to feel a little random though. The only drums I hear is the kick. Maybe try adding a something more to keep rhythm, like a hi hat sound, or some cymbals? Anyway, great track! 9/10, 5/5.

2.33 / 5.00 (+ 2.33)

Wow

Man I love that lead instrument! I would love to hear a full length version of this song! Had to download this one. It starts out sounding like a creepy ambient song, but turns into a catchy, grooved out techno funk song. Nicely done! Let me know if you ever end up doing something with this!

Snare

Not a huge fan of the stock snare, but the rest is very nice. Very calm and laid back.

Nice

The song as a whole sounds so hollow. Like it's missing something. Maybe if it was louder? From what I can hear of the vocals, their pretty sweet. I love distorted vocals in music. Turn them up so we can hear them, and make the song longer and you'll have a 10 from me.

BERSERKYD responds:

I put the vocal higher ;) But I made it short because I want it that way..

Well thx for the comment

The end

The song is nice and laid back, but the ending is horrible. It's really not that scary, more just annoying. Lose the ending and you have a great song.

Stormwrath responds:

Okay, thanks

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