Score: 7

"Not Bad"

submission: Bubble Buster

date: November 23, 2009

There's really nothing much to this game though. The background is very plain and rather boring. I'd like to see some sort of animation when you hit the bubbles, like make them explode somehow. Not bad though.

Score: 8

"Not Bad"

submission: The Dating Game animated

date: August 20, 2009

I'm not a huge fan of the animation style, but it kinda worked for what I think you were aiming for. The voice acting was halfway decent, but still not quite there. Lois' voice was very close, and I could actually hear the Stewie pretty well. The only voice I think didn't work very well was Peter, but that's what made it funny.

I wasn't too impressed with the jokes themselves, but the animation reminded me a lot of some of those Saturday Night Live cartoons. Not a bad cartoon, I must say.

Score: 7

"Not too bad"

submission: Turbo Tanks

date: August 19, 2009

The graphics are okay, but they don't come across as too impressive to me. They look like you just took a bunch of random pictures and animated them. The backgrounds also just look like pictures, so they aren't that interesting.

The game play feels really flawed. The checkpoints don't work. Every time I pass through one and die, I end up back at the beginning. I consider this a huge problem, since the whole point of a check point is so that you don't have to go back to the beginning. Also, if you're going really fast when you fall down a hole, the camera keeps going. You may look into this, but it's not really a huge deal.

Not too bad for your second game, but keep working, as it has some obvious flaws.

Score: 9

"I love 3xOsc"

submission: 3xOsc Experiment Song

date: November 28, 2009

Your intro is neat. I like the beginning synth very much, but your second one is so soft compared to the intro that it just gets lost. I love the pickup at 0:38. This song feels so heavy and dark, which is a good thing.

Your percussion is alright, and I like how strong it is, but I feel like it could be even more powerful, to keep up with the bass a little better.

The outro is very awkward. The song just stops. Maybe try fading the song out at the end, or ending on the first note.

This is a great tune though. I love it!

Score: 8

"Not bad"

submission: AznPB - Activate!

date: November 28, 2009

The intro is okay, but I'm really not a huge fan of the guitar. It sounds way too light and lost in the mix, especially in the intro. I love the use of the stutter throughout. Very Linkin Park-esque. The lyrics are okay, but come across as a little cheesy They actually remind me of the lyrics from "Points of Authority" by, well, Linkin Park.

The vocals are pretty good and sound like the lead singer from Syrus. The song is obviously way too short, and I hope that this is just like a teaser. I'd love to hear a full length version of this song if you've got it.

Score: 9

"Great work!"

submission: March_To_Eternity [Box-Killa]

date: November 24, 2009

Good start. I like the piano at the beginning and the way it leads into the drums/rhythm. I'm not a fan of the transition right at 0:49. The sudden stop kinda kills the mood a little bit, almost like the first 45 secs should just be an interlude. The buildup afterward though is very nice. The stop at 1:45 is a little awkward and feels forced.

The lead here at 1:45 though is very nice and kinda creepy. It builds right back up, which fits rather well with the whole tune of the song. I like how powerful the drums feel throughout. I'm really not a huge fan of the way the song keeps stopping and rebuilding up. Every time I really start to get into the track, it starts over, making it feel a little random.

The piano at 3:27 is just a little too crazy for my taste, but the ending is nice. I also don't like how the ending cuts off like that. It should hold off a little longer so that the notes can ring out.

Overall, not a bad track at all! I'm just not a huge fan of the random stops and start ups throughout. But a 9/10 5/5 nonetheless!